A.J Murphy

My heart fell as I listened to the man over the intercom. "Round one, that means there are more rounds." I grumbled, shaking the thought from my head. I shifted ...

Thanks That really helped! I just went back and edited it slightly.

Okay, I hope this isn't too cliche, it may seem like that in the beginning but all I can say it's not what it seems. It's my first so wish ...

Wow that was amazing. The only thing I must say to you about it is that The time era seems a bit confusing. Other than that I can't wait to ...

I must say this piece is interesting, but I think you should add some memories and in the beginning I was confused about the age of the sisters, if one ...

I like this story, it's original and new. I just wanted to put out there that Sara seems like a very stereotypical popular girl, and if that's what you were ...

I stopped moving for a second as I watched the arrow Abbey shot trail into the box, with the button pressed the timer went off. I laughed. 'Why didn't anyone ...

A.J Pisces I watched as the male aries fought Victoria, witnessing the rock morph into a snake, biting Ray. I stared in awe at their power and fighting ability. It ...

A.J Pisces I took in a shaky breath as I watched the students fight. This was stupid in my opinion, pitting classmates against classmates. My group had head into the ...

Is it too late to join because I want to me a pisces, and from what I'm aware their are none. Name Annelise Jade (likes to be called A.J) Age ...

I like this piece, it intrigues me. I think you can replace some of the she's with the girls name though, it might make a very good rythem to the ...